Trailer Analysis

My trailer looks good however, I don't believe it looks professional in several ways. We may decide to film some new clips and enter them into our film. Some of the problems I believe our trailer has are;

Too much like a Short film

Shots are too long

Not enough shot techniques

These are the three main problems I can see when looking at my trailer. Each is bad in its own way, for example. The shot length is sometimes too long, which may cause the audience to loose interest and stop watching due to boredom. The film seems too much like a compressed short film, the problem with this as it makes the trailer confusing for someone who doesn't know the story. This is also bad as it too can lead to a lose of audience concentration. The lack of shot techniques is bad as it strays to far from the conventions of a trailer.

Some ways to improve this would be too;

Cut up longer shots with quick fast paced action shots, for instance a dead body or someone running away from something.

Cutting out some of the shots that give away plot line to create enigmas and also speed up the pace.

Include some new shots which feature clever shot techniques, such as a match on action shot.